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You remember when our lives were burning,
And we jumped into the fire,
I'm still in debt for the mistakes you make,
Don't throw it all away.

Just take whatever you can reach,
And pull me in all your ways,
I'm not the performer in this play,
You took it all away.

This is your life, I'm just your doll,
And I don't want to see,
I'm sick of your reality all wrapped up in plastic,
I wouldn't give me away.

Let me fight my own armies,
And save me from yourselves,
I'm painting rainbows in your Hell,
Please let me fade away.
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I really wish the comments were before the actual deviation...anyway I am aware this is not my best piece, but I'm trying to get back into the creative swing so I am uploading something for once!

In a nutshell I shouldn't attempt poetry at 1:30AM.

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:iconhiddendusk:
heh, in that case I shouldn't attempt poetry at 4:30 am. =D you did good chick.

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:iconfallinfromthestars:
Thank you very much =]

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:iconhiddendusk:
no prob. hun. :3

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:icondreamknightcmc:
I wish I was as good at writing as you... Oh well I guess then you wouldn't be as special and that would be a shame ^_^;;

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The results of my competition are up in my Journal!!! come take a look ^_^ or I'll sulk ;p
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:iconfallinfromthestars:
Thank you *huggles* :heart:

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:icondreamknightcmc:
:cuddle::heart: No trouble at all ^_^

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The results of my competition are up in my Journal!!! come take a look ^_^ or I'll sulk ;p
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