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I'll sing a song for you tonight,
If you'll look me in the eyes,
I'm not gonna tell you a lie,
God knows you're sad enough.

I flipped a coin and sent it reeling,
I landed up and you landed down,
Doesn't matter cause in the end,
It's still the same coin.

I blinked and missed it yet still I see,
The image of you alone,
But when I tried my best to reach you,
All I was looking at was me.

The stars they couldn't burn brighter,
Still we failed to see,
I thought the equation was all in 'hope',
Yet I forgot to divide by 'pain'.

And the streets have broken windows,
They lie smashed upon your face,
And the fire keeps on screaming,
It's never been so out of place.
©2008-2009 ~FallinFromTheStars
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Author's Comments

I don't think this is in the right category but I didn't know quite where it fitted.

Written this morning between midnight and 1AM which is probably fairly self explanatory for it.

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:iconluminousmoon:
I really adore the first and third stanzas^-^ :cookie:

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We make for your sake such things as stand fast,
Through the ages these pages forever will last.
On blank paper the printer sets down what is heard,
Giving life to what's rife with the power of the word. -Michael Kongehl
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Thank you =] :cookie:

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:iconxpenguin-avengerx:
No prizes to guess who this is about.
Effectively written.. poetry is "finding the correct words to voice your emotions" according to our english teacher.

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Make Tea Not War :peace:
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Your English teacher speaks wisely!

Lol no prizes indeed...

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:icondreamknightcmc:
I wish I was this good at writing.... Oh well :worship:

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The results of my competition are up in my Journal!!! come take a look ^_^ or I'll sulk ;p
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:iconfallinfromthestars:
:blush: I didn't think it was that fab...but thank you :glomp:

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:icondreamknightcmc:
I thought it was great though so nyar! ;p :cuddle:

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The results of my competition are up in my Journal!!! come take a look ^_^ or I'll sulk ;p
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:icongarzla:
It's beautiful. :) great work!

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"Tune your mind to the right channel, things get played at a higher scale"
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Thank you very much :]

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